BagMoose's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Android 18]

Absolutely terrific shading! But 18's torso looks a little strange? I think the shoulders aren't quite right. But the legs look really nice!

RonDMC responds:

Thanks for the feedback! I could definitely fix those two areas. Glad you like it non-the-less.

[Cammy White]

Really great shading and texture! but it looks like the proportions and perspective are a little wonky. Did you draw from your head, or have a reference? If not I would highly recommend it, its extremely helpful.

ColoredInsanity responds:

^^ Thanks. This was referenced from a few different pictures of poses. I think some of the wonky-ness came from the fact I wasn't intending to draw Cammy, It just sort of happened. Does that make sense? I hope so.

[Mythical Girl (WIP)]

A really nice sketch! Pretty jealous, wish I could draw clothing folds like that. Can't wait to see it fully colored!

GhoulKitten responds:

Thanks! Just keep practicing, lol.

[Critical V]

Man I can't agree more. If they just kept at superman and batman being pitted against each other by Lex Luthor it would've been great. Too bad they spideramn 3'd it, way too many characters to give adequate development for them all. Visually it was cool though

InsanityinaBox responds:

Indeed!

[Orc]

The face looks great, and the background looks pretty solid but the hair is a litlle thin, which I think you might already know. All that aside its a pretty cool picture

LukyM1ky responds:

After the while i tried to update, still ahve problem with hair, im not good with it and updated another things. :)

[Beck Reloaded]

Everything is great! Your use of sharp angles to accentuate body details is truly great, great shading! But I do have to say that The face itself does give me some issues. The eyes are strange proportions in relation to each other and the face as a whole. I understand that this may just be your art style, but compared to your other work it still looks a little off. But that could just be me being a little picky. Other than that, great picture!

WooleyWorld responds:

Yes. I forgot to slide them over and fit them in. It also doesn't help that I mis-colored the white on the right eye...
But yes I'm glad you enjoy the style. I'll keep at it.

[Listening to music all the time!]

Color splats look good, shading is nice, but your skull's profile needs a lot of work. May I suggest looking up skull profiles as a reference?

deafguitarist063 responds:

thanks! :) That sound good idea. Will do that to use something as reference :)

[Alice In Wonderland (Improved)]

Alice looks great!. However your cheshire cat's smile forms into a sort of V shape when I think you may have been going for the typical smile shape. I would suggest sketching the smile before drawing a foreground object in the future.

GhoulKitten responds:

Thanks ! But I did that on purpose. :) *pats your back* It IS Wonderland of course... Also, you don't know how much editing I had to do...I took a cruddy picture with a cruddy ipad of the drawing, and messed with it a bunch in Photoshop, then colored, and tweaked.