BagMoose's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Sleeping Medow]

Please submit more art! You can easily be scouted as soon as you hit 4 submissions

JustOogie responds:

i will do.

[quick animation]

Hey sweet, I always see your stuff on twitter but didn't know you had a NG profile too!

DeDeur responds:

Thank you! I was posting stuff on NG pretty infrequently but lately I've been trying to be more active on here!

[PastelGirl]

Hey I feel like a lot of people will see something good, give it a good review, and then move on but I dont think that really helps you much. You're a talented artist and really hope to see you post more. I have no doubt once you put out your fourth post there's gonna be scouts waiting. Keep up the good work!

Arzielzq responds:

oh my god, Thank you n.n

[Son goku]

So overall this is okay! you do well with little things, like Goku's hands, his clothes, colors and highlights. But when everything is put together theres a few things off.

His right arm's perspective is funky, I understand you meant to foreshorten it but it looks moee like its stubby. Also the placement of goku's face on his head doesn't line up with where his chin is. Almost like you draw his body in increments, each part at a time.

I think if you focus on improving your anatomy and perspective you can become a fantastic artist, and I reccomend practicing gesture drawing. Its a geat excercise for learning proper proportions.

Im glad you're posting often because it really shows how passionate you are as an artist, and I really want to see you improve!

artcupper responds:

thank you very much for your constructive criticism I will continue working to improve more!

[Zachary Gooman: Dancing]

Hey Congrats on getting scouted!

MissyMeghanAnimation responds:

Thank you!~ :D

[Monika]

Hey wow a great pic thats not stolen! Caught off guard bexause you dont typically see to many talented artists in unscouted. Keep up the good work!

MissyMeghanAnimation responds:

aw, that's very sweet! thank you!
(What does it mean to be 'unscouted' anyway? that I'm new to this? cause I certainly am~ )

[Random Drawing]

Hey this is pretty good! But when you're posting to the Art Portal make sure your picture is not just a sketch. Fully colored at least, and lineart is reccomended. This is really good and it just needs to be finished. Please keep this in m8nd when posting to the art portal and you'll be scouted in no time!

TheSuggarAddict responds:

Thanks for the advice :)

[Spike]

Better! but the right eye (spike's right, the viewer's left) is still a little too high. When a subjects head is tilted the eyes should match the angle of the tilted head.

[chu]

Hey really good! Only complaint is that her right eye is a little high and its perspective is off. Like the eyes make it look like the head should be turned away from the viewer just slightly. But everything else is pretty good! The color selection is awesome, anatomy looks natural for your style, and her hair looks great. Not to mention your highlights, which are on point. Keep on putting up quality work and I have no doubt you'll be scouted!
This definitley the best unscouted submission I've seen today.

shofilla responds:

Thank you very much

["I forgot to feed the dog"]

Idk why this is so low because mechanically speaking your anatomy and grasp of lighting are probably better than anything else posted today