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Wow really great! Only wish the aspect ratio was wide screen but honestly I can forgive that because this was pretty good. Keep up the good work!

Nice work! I liked the story, interesting concept. It's not perfect but They only improvements that you need will come with practicing animation more. Keep up the good work!

Add a play button or export this to a better video format, and add some sound. Some gunshot sfx or even some music would help this a lot. The animation in this really isn't too bad, but it feel really unfinished without sound. If I were you I would keep this scene, and try to give it more of a narrative.

Mark-Uhl responds:

Ty for your review , will try to do it

Okay so I saw the second part of this first and left my review there. The gunshot might be a little too loud so check your audio to see if it's clipping (in the red). My advice would to put this piece and your other piece together as one movie. But seriously, the animation isn't too bad you just gotta work on sound.

Mark-Uhl responds:

thanks for your review, and sorry i didnt find the silncer sound so excuse me for that

So look, its not that this is bad. It actually looks better than most things in under judgement. But it just isn't a movie. If I were you I would submit this in the art section.

Great job man! A lot conveyed without any dialogue, and loved that you decided to animate the hair on Robert.

Looks like a step up from pivot animation, but man you could have at least added a start button, I'm pretty sure if you check the portal you can find a tutorial to do so.

Looks like an ambitious project man, but it feels hollow.

Splattt responds:

Interesting perspective. I've been working on this for a while so it's easy to get tunnel vision. Message me and go into more detail, I wanna know what makes it feel hollow to you.

I was expecting a great quality animation from the opening sequence, but all I got was a visual novel.

Atleast its not made with screenshots being put together in movie maker. But seriously dude, there's open source animating software. I suggest getting a mic and learning to animate a little. Because a music posts usually only do well if they're really well animated.

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